Is de tekst die je bij de extra uitleg vindt in het correct Brits-Engels geschreven?

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Graag zou ik er eventuele spelling- én grammaticafouten uit halen, met de hulp van mijn goeie vraag-collega's, uiteraard.
"I like summer best, I think it is the most beautiful time of the year because it’s hot and sunny. In the summer holiday, I often go on a trip to Italy or Spain with my parents and sometimes, I go to France with ‘Kazou’. And when it’s too hot, you can refresh yourself with a lovely ice-cream, especially with vanilla taste. In the summertime, when the weather is fine, you can spend your afternoon in the garden and have a nice barbecue. The long evenings are wonderful to sit outside, watch the stars and listen to the sound of silence."

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I like summer -the- -most-, I think it is the most beautiful time of the year -komma-, because it’s hot and sunny. In the summer holiday, I often go on a trip to Italy or Spain with my parents and sometimes -GEEN KOMMA- I go to France with ‘Kazou’. And -if- it’s too hot, you can refresh yourself with a lovely ice-cream, especially with vanilla taste -zou beter; especially the vanilla flavour-. In the summertime, when the weather is fine, you can spend your afternoon in the garden and have a nice barbecue. The long evenings are wonderful to sit outside -In the long evenings it is wonderful to sit outside- , watch the stars and listen to the sound of silence.

Correcties tussen de strepen, hoop dat het je wat helpt.

Correcties tussen de strepen, hoop dat het je wat helpt.

Is de tekst die je bij de extra uitleg vindt in het correct Brits-Engels geschreven?

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